Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Over recent years, there has been a massive growth in the travelling sector. Research has shown that the percentage of travellers has increased many times within a few years. In my perspective, there are many reasons behind this trend and the travellers reap several rewards from this practice.
To begin with, the main cause of a jump in the revolution of the travelling industry is its affordability. A few years back, travelling tickets were very costly, and only affluent people were able to enjoy these facilities, but now, as a result of competition, many companies have started low-cost flights that enable middle class and even low-income individuals to move around the world. Apart from this, another reason could be the power of advertisements and electronic media. Today a vast majority of individuals have internet access which provides valuable information, such as deals of tourism companies giving discounts on flight prices and other reasonably priced tour packages, thus helping people to decide the flight and place that according to their budget.
Indeed, there are numerous benefits to travelling to visitors. One obvious attraction is to expand one's business. Those visiting foreign countries can directly sign business contracts and agreements in-person thus enhancing economic growth. People will not only garnish the benefits of trades, but they also enjoy vacations as well. These days, companies offer many tour packages for their employees which provides employees with a chance to escape from their daily routine. Finally, visiting other nations benefits students to study and learn a new language, and culture and customs.
In conclusion, the revolution in technology and cheaper flights are the main contributing factors to the increase in the number of travellers. Clearly aforementioned have benefited the visitors to achieve their economic goals and enjoy cultures and customs of new places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47157190635 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172588868 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628762541806 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0974084613 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216148731731 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742228451871 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707822704605 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123225284461 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072194741075 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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