Today, parents spend little free time with their children. Why is this the case? Who are more affected parents or children?
Nowadays, some people believe that parents and their children are deficient in spending time together.
In this essay, I will discuss about the reason for this statement and who received higher affected.
First of all, there are several reasons why parents do not pay attention to their children. One of the
discernible reasons is that parents have hectic schedules. Indubitably, with the increasing expenses,
parents have to work long hours or even doing two or three jobs at the same time in order to earning
enough money to cover the basic needs. Another reason is the generation gap between children and
parents. It is because of the proliferation of technology development, children can easily adapt and use
technology devices without effort while their parents constantly have barrier, which will lead to limit
understanding of each other. Consequently, the two generations are more and more misleading
respectively.
With the growing phenomenon, I think that children can be more affected. The first reason is that
children can have the lack of the orientation in later life. Because parents have a significant role in their
children's life, especially in the formative years, who can help children knowing deeply about
themselves. As a result, younger people have to waste time on reorientation when they grow up. The
second cause is children can easily be caused by several mental conditions. Undoubtedly, children who
do not gain enough attention from their parents, they will tend to self-blame and be less enthusiastic
with others. Consequently, this solitary lifestyle can lead them to do some illegal actions without feeling
guilty.
In conclusion, I believe that the generation gap and the hectic schedule of parents is the reason why
family members do not spend time together and children are the most affected people in this situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.367003367 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86863154181 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5587529514 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407406145459 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137000235256 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848898264239 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127967959393 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732867092201 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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