In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack suppor because of their parents’ absence.
In modern world, it is not only women’s duty to take care of her children, sacrifice her social life and also her career. However, neither it is not man’s duty to take care. Hence it is considered that both parents are responsible for their children, they should equally support children while committing social life. For this reason, in answering this question, I am hundred percent agree with the statement that both parents are necessary to go out to work. I have three essential statement to support my opinion.
First of all, it is true that if both parents work the income will be more sufficient to grow in good living condition, good education and good health. For example, these days most parent’s worries about education of their children, and definitely enormous tuition fee. As a result, they might choose cheaper choice with guilt. But if both works, there is no need to worry about the guilty choices.
Secondly, home-staying mother might have considered as good example. Even though, children tend to choose their role model other than their mother, they will probably choose the one who is more successful. Hence to become a role model to our children, it is essential to work successfully. For instances, children will be more motivated how both their parents working successfully while balancing work and life.
Lastly, both parents working does not mean they have no time for their children. If they can balance the schedule, it is more decent condition to live happy with good education, living condition and good mental health. One example is my own life. Both my partner and I work as full time, and we also balance family time and work time. I think I have no feeling about lack of support to my child because of my absence in 8 hours a day.
In sum, the statement about lack of support because one parent is working is not critical issue if we only can manage time. However, if parents cannot manage time and working till dawn to dust, it will be warning sign of lack of support to the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ther it is not man’s duty to take care. Hence it is considered that both parents are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... choose the one who is more successful. Hence to become a role model to our children,...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...own life. Both my partner and I work as full time, and we also balance family time and wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45469670199 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.841177436 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310230623033 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900350569447 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076015336116 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171566702479 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176866691275 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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