In todays competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to out to work. While some say children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents absence.
Discuss both views and hive your own opinion.
The current modern world is expensive. This situation has forced many parents to work leaving the child at home. People who are against this argue that, this practice is detrimental to the child's mental development while others say extra money would help the family. I believe, spending time with family is undeniable but that extra income is crucial for the child;s future.
Every parent should spend substantial amount of time with their child. Early stage is the most important time for child's mental development. If parents stay at work all day then the child may would not learn basic education like right and wrong. This may effect their decision making abilities in the future. In addition, absence of parent can make them feel isolated from the family. Staying isolated for extensive period of time may lead to depression and other mental illnesses. Research shows, children suffering from depression are mainly from lack of parenting. Therefore, parents should stay home with their child.
that said, financial stability is more important for the child than the parents. Education are expensive thse days. Parents can save up for the future which can be used to cover expense of higher study. On top of that, they can admit their child to the best school and they can afford to appoint private tutor for their child. Therefore, extra wealth can really benefit the future of the child.
In conclusion, absence of parents is mentally detrimental to the child. but growing up in a wealthy family brightens up their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06299212598 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.364421532 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7489736777 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6842105263 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196351333878 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639842926655 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317700729336 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122802164772 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260160807286 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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