"Tomorrow is the most important thing in our life." However, some people think that the present time is more important. How important is it for individuals and the country to think and do something for the future? What is your own opinion?
People usually try to predict their future in order to avoid the incidents to be impacted from the happening. These people have their own certain principle for the point that tomorrow is the most essential aspect. In parallel with this contrary, others point out that the present would be more crucial. From my point of views, I believe that both present and future have the equal importance. This essay will discuss both views with adequate reasons.
To begin with, living with all personal abilities for the present would be able to set a foundation for a better future. Being at the first sight of view, it is really hard to achieve all the targets that people have set for their lives. This situation may come from both outer and inner reasons of people; as the result, it effects people’s directions severely due to the fact that they have rejected many opportunities in the past so as to follow the dreams. For instance, many Asian parents desire their off-springs to be good at science educational learning, however, not all the acquirers could be superior at that point. In stead, they should be guided to go forward with their talents. On the leading of thoughts, the world is moving all the time and people cannot manage their future completely. Doing their full finest would help them find and highlight the routes that can contribute to the issued successes. At the end of their being, people can live with no regret as for that was as much for the most they are able to put an attempt.
In reverse, having a clear prospect can bring many benefits. One of those is that people can clarify the steps in need for conducting if they run for the achievement or the trophy being set in their mind. People can gather their resources to the only one philosophy would help them maximize all the potentiality. For example, Space X, a company in space industry has been digging in the reusable rockets since 2000s. Although there was many failures, at present, they are one of the most avanced space companies in the world. Moreover, holding a thoughtful future will make the world more sustainale for the younger generations. This shall make people not only aim in creating profits, but also need to take care of other perspectives like environment and society. However, these matters will build up for the long-lasting development / standard.
In conclusion, both present and future have the important aspects that impact every personel living. In my opinion, people should balance the investment in present and future in order to bring all the advantages of those to their thriving life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rejected many opportunities in the past so as to follow the dreams. For instance, many A...
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... other perspectives like environment and society. However, these matters will bui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8404494382 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48411065922 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530337078652 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2768151369 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.652173913 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21739130435 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197328079524 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607475183652 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455045589904 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135226608146 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267695669016 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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