The number of people traveling faraway countries has become more in recent times. Majority of nations are motivated to invest on holiday making sector. Despite many people believe that investing on tourism has countless downsides, I would argur that drawbacks of it are eclipsed by benefits. This examine both sides.
On the one hand, focusing on holiday making industry can bring innumerable positive elements into people's lives. One of the primary benefit will be that people can land jobs and get living wages. Many hotels need to employ more than a hundred employees during peak season consequently if the number of hotels and resorts rise dramatically, there will be many job opennings available for citizens. Countries will also become prosperous when holiday makers spend in foreign currencies such as dollar and euro. It is obvious that holiday makers especially who have foreign currencies will help them increase their budged. Further and more importantly, citizens will meet new cultures and traditions, and thus they will be able to look at things from different angles and perspectives. For example, a study by University of Man in 2018 revealed that only 2% of Man have suffered from anxiety and depression given the fact that Man is one of the world renowed holiday destinations and 80% of citizens work on tourism.
On the other hand, investing on holiday making industry will lead to countless phenomenons. To begin with, when primary target of a country is tourism, there will be fewer investment on fabricates which produce automobiles, cell phones and other electronic appliances. Therefore many engineers and managers will not find suitable positions to work and thus they will move industrialised nations. Brain drain will be a major problem for tourism oriented countries. For instance, more than 8 million university gradutes in Kan move Canada and Germany in 2018. This number will rise up tp 10 million in 2019 due to the lack of job prospects. Moreover, land for cultivation will become less since hotels will be built on these fertile areas. Tomatoes, potatoes and onions which are main ingredients of many meals will have to be imported thus their price will rise exponentially.
By way of conclusion, many goverments persuade citizens to invest on tourism. Although tourism oriented economy will bring many negative elements into people's lives, I would contend that downsides of it are overshaded by advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
...esorts rise dramatically, there will be many job opennings available for citizens. Count...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...phones and other electronic appliances. Therefore many engineers and managers will not fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22081218274 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72454688183 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560913705584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8611938584 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15776600225 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532639712178 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606444435797 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131429744486 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623810785539 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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