Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries.
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?
Adolescent always face the several challenges on the way of adulthood and successful life. However, life is more difficult to the school-leavers as they encountered with many obstacles in the way of employment. Whereas, there are others challenges, that today’s youth are facing in modern age. I totally agree on this statement and essay will examine the arguments on the favor on the topic.
To begin with, unemployment is one the emerging issue of today, in which whole world is trapped. Well educated students are also struggling to get the job as per the qualification due to high competition, so we can imagine that school leaver are facing more problems in this situation. However, every company want to recruit those workers with high qualification, technical skill and experiences. In this condition, school leaver need to adjust themselves in lower-level work, with low income. For instance, the recent survey had revealed that, most of the unemployed youth are recorded, who had leave schooling due to several reasons. Furthermore, bad condition of work condition, income lead them to live low quality life in future. While, sometime with having technical skilled with them they did not get right opportunity due to lack of academic certificate.
On the other hand, today’s youth are facing more problems beside unemployment and these are creating more obstacles to be success in life. Likewise, political instability, societal rules and restrictions, discrimination, natural disaster, drought and famine, nepotism are also factors that create difficulties in the path of success. For example, in many developing countries, due to the political instability many adolescents had closed their business and recent pandemic of COVID19 made many youth bankrupt.
In conclusion, for school leavers getting better job is very difficult, while at the same time every teenagers are facing lot of obstacles in the successive path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44224422442 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98129975359 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.896517937 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208872091503 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697916089576 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431544034187 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12090544665 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615176108661 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.