Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A majority of people argued that an university must promote gender balance in every their course of study. This essay agrees that university should make a necessary rules regarding balancing the equal numbers of male and female in every classroom. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that, equal number of student enrollment will maximize the education friendly environment and secondly discuss on how it leads to competitive outcomes.
With regards to the positive concern, studying in equal number in every classroom will boost harmonious environment to each of the learner in regards to secure their better future. Similarly, all the student will be able to experience the sense of equality in terms of university rules and regulation along with get involved meaningfully in every aspect of the education program. As a result of that, more trustworthy and supportive environment among the student can be established to fulfill the academic requirement of respective university. For example, Tribhuwan University as a primary example where in every year university is able to maintain peaceful academic environment just because of its policy related to education friendly environment.
On the other hand, it allows student to have more reliable knowledge and skills when they get completion of their academic career. Student will get opportunities to participate in various skill development workshop and seminar regarding sharpen their academic knowledge in to practice and they will also feel the importance of independent decision to achieve the tangible result in long run. As a consequent of that, healthy competitive environment will be exist between the student regarding producing more dignified human personal at the end of their academic career. For instance, The Himalayan Times recently published that, Nepalese university are able to producing more competitive human personal in every year through their healthy education strategy.
In conclusion, the idea of accepting equal number of male and female student by university is able to maximizing learning environment to the student for their better future and have also producing more competent human personal in various field. I personally believe that, promoting equality itself is a good idea to establish various positive outcomes by various universities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
A majority of people argued that an university must promote gender balance ...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ious environment to each of the learner in regards to secure their better future. Similarly, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56741573034 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90894080795 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8817004873 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.461538462 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216701375797 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090812265581 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847694928587 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154414165257 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680248057247 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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