In our current world, it is undeniable fact that education is an inevitable part of our life. Nowadays, more and more teenager is forced to attend university. This is because parents have thought no work opportunity for an illiterate person in work life, but the important problem of education is that argument have persisted as to whether the students should pay for this privilege not. Although there are persuading evidences on both sides, ı strongly agree that education must be free for all.
First of all, one argument propound in favour of why the student need to pay money is that education is becoming more expensive to fund as university grow in size. Consequently, especially technical universities have paid huge money for laboratory equipment for people who study engineering or medicine, so they should pay for at least some of the cost, especially students have an amazing career after the graduate and they will find a high paid job. Moreover, if they do pay money to the university, they can feel yourself under pressure and can pay more attention to the lesson. This is because even if they will pay at least $ 1, they will realize that education is very important.
However, a common criticism of this price of education in the universities is that, it causes extra stress for students. This is because the majority of students attending university are from the middle classes. Nevertheless, all people have equal rights under the constitution so everyone deserves to enter wherever they want, therefore in the history of humanity there are several great evidence that people who have impecunious parents have made great inventions. For example, Aziz Sancar won the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for his discovery in the field of DNA.
In conclusion, I think there is evidence to suggest that some of the sense we have experienced in the modern World have affected our lives, so I am of opinion that all education should remain equally available to all regardless of income. This is not only fair, but will also ensure that countries can prosper and develop into the future with a well-educated workforce.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'teenager' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: teenager
...le part of our life. Nowadays, more and more teenager is forced to attend university. This is...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... This is because parents have thought no work opportunity for an illiterate perso...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ucation is that argument have persisted as to whether the students should pay for this privil...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...dicine, so they should pay for at least some of the cost, especially students have an amazi...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
... because even if they will pay at least $ 1, they will realize that education is ve...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...think there is evidence to suggest that some of the sense we have experienced in the modern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00281690141 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74019697461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560563380282 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9353808628 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133250592029 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500345592567 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456670681617 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847030261344 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293273087437 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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