A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
It is sometimes argued that universities accept same the number of man and woman students in every different subject. I completely agree this opinion but depend on subject that universities accept equal the number of female and male.
On the one hand, many people claim that universities should be accept similar the number male and female students in among subject. This is a not wrong. Nowadays, we are living in a modern where have not sex discrimination, man and woman can comfortable creation and develop thinking. We should be accept same the number of male and female to the different idea in the different way.
On the other hand, other people believe that depend on subjects which universities should be accept equal the number of man and woman in every subject. For example, weightlifting is a sport for strong people, it need to person who had good health. So, this sport appropriate more for male than female. In addition, depend on the amount of register of among students, universities cannot wait to enough same the number of male and female in every subject. So, I think that it depend on the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose any subjects that they like. This make students learn well.
To sum up, I agree with idea that universities should accept equal the number of male and female students in every subjects. However, this also depend on subjects that students want to study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'accepted'?
Suggestion: accepted
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'sexed'.
Suggestion: sexed
...e are living in a modern where have not sex discrimination, man and woman can comfo...
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Message: Did you mean 'accepted'?
Suggestion: accepted
...tion and develop thinking. We should be accept same the number of male and female to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'accepted'?
Suggestion: accepted
...n subjects which universities should be accept equal the number of man and woman in ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84836065574 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5574919846 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434426229508 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8921553277 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354305701053 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141939747071 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123354160113 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283985593363 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785608101069 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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