University students should pay all the costs of their studies because university education benefits only individuals but not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that universities bring benefits to individuals who engage in learning for their future, however, not the society. For that reason, people say that students should take care of the university expense by themselves. In my opinion, while some students can pay all cost in exchange for the knowledge they gain from universities, I believe that other part of students should be sponsored because their contribution to the society comes later after they graduate.
Indeed, the cost of high level studying must be covered by individuals who seek knowledge for their own future. Usually, these people go to universities with an ambition to achieve essential knowledge for their own sake. When they have a wide range of knowledge and strong skillsets, they can secure their future with high-income occupations. Thus, it can be easily seen that the benefits students receive later in their lives are far greater than the amount of money they spent for universities. In other words, paying the cost of their studying is simply a fair trade for all the privileges that they will have later in their lives.
However, there is another part of students whose purpose of going to the university is to contribute to the society after their graduation. Of course, the people in this part should be sponsored or at least not be fully charged for their courses. Since these individuals mostly come from low-income families that cannot afford their studies, they value the sponsoring fund from the society and create a mindset to excel other students in future career to return the favor. As a matter of fact, many entrepreneurs who earlier received support from society for their studying are now giving away charity for the homeless or scholarships for students.
In conclusion, I believe some students should pay all the cost of universities for their own purposes while others need the support for the benefits they bring back to the society in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, while, at least, in conclusion, of course, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63344713009 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8220676841 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271165511384 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120586545279 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062232262138 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213210999189 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488944963438 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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