as well as making money, business also have social reponsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a widespread belief that, besides making money, enterprises also need to have public responsibilities. I find myself in complete agreement with this opinion.
On the on hand, the efforts of companies to maximize their profits may have some benefits for society as a whole. Firstly, the more the profits earned by enterprises, the more taxes they pay for government. As a result, authorities may have more revenue to spend in public constructions like hospital, school. That lead to an improvement in quality of life of the whole community. Secondly, earning huge profits make extending their companies, which is important for solving unemployed problems by creating new job opportunities. Which is main causes of poverty and society’s vices.
On the other hand, There are strong reasons why businesses should also accept that they have social responsibilities. The first reason is that their activities have an effect on the environment which is a urgent problem. Without controls, production processes may result in serious environmental degradation, such as global warming stemming factory emissions or the irresponsible disposal of industrial waste. For instance, If factories installed waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemical wastes in to rives, water pollution could be controlled. An other reason is that enterprises should help those who are less fortunate. For example, big corporations such as Vinamilk and SamSung have enhanced their public image through philanthropic actions such as scholarships and giving charitable donations
In conclusion, although I recognize that making profits is the fundamental principle of business, I would argue that all business should profoundly reflect upon the on social responsibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67169811321 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22343678049 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5603670049 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148916331086 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475882385961 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676454156787 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101460082103 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394392101852 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.