As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as besides making money, enterprises also need to have public obligation. In my opinion, maximizing profits is the top of priority for each company, I agree that businesses should include social responsibilities in their operations.
On the one hand, there are some benefits for society as a whole when firms make an effort to increase profits. Firstly, such enormous is that government could levies taxes from the immense revenue of companies. As the consequence, political leaders have a larger budget to invest in indispensable fields including education and healthcare, which leads to improving the quality of life for the community. Secondly, by generating gigantic profits, entrepreneurs have the opportunity to grow their business. A good example of this case is that firms might use their capital to expand their production, create more jobs for society.
On the other hand, enterprises have an obligation to act for the benefit of society at large. Perhaps the strongest reason of this is that companies bring gravely harm to the environment. There is no doubt that without controls, the activities of businesses may result in serious environmental degradation such as global warming stems from factory emissions or companies discharge chemical wastes into rivers instead of installing waste treatment systems. Another reason is that enterprises should help those who are less fortunate to enhance their public image, since they have enough money to do this. Big corporations such as TH True Milk and Ford have philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships and giving charitable donations could be taken as a particularly salient example of this.
It is therefore safe to say, considering all the factors given, that making profits is the fundamental principle of business, also, all businesses should enhance the overall welfare of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'levy'
Suggestion: levy
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factors'' or 'factor's'?
Suggestion: factors'; factor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41946308725 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99163473436 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.921682528 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182543570096 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569513368809 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535497681377 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118252712718 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680696318088 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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