As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsiblities.
Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the issue that besides having profit, enterprises should also have social responsibilities remains a source of controversy. While there is a strong case against this viewpoint, I personally think that both profit and public duties are equally important to the development of a company.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why I support the view that it is crucial for a corporation to make money. First and foremost, as long as enterprises earn profit, they can pay taxes. Simultaneously, the governments can have money to invest in infrastructure and facillities. For example, the authority can spend part of their tax revenue developing health centres and schools, which improves people’s living standards. Moreover, by earning money, companies can alleviate unemployment, which directly contributes to the prosperity and stability of the economy. This is due to the fact that since the enterprise has money, employees can be paid to feed their family.
On the other hand, I also believe that corporations should place great importance on their social responsibilities. Firstly, they should be aware of ecological protection since most of the industrial activities involve environmental degradation. For instance, businesses can use proper waste treatment systems to stop its detrimental effects on the ecosystem. Another rationale is that enterprises can also subsidize the community through charitable donations. They might be able to donate part of their profit in a green campaign to save threatened and endanger species facing high risk of extinction or build houses for the homeless.
In conclusion, from my perspective, I find that it is important for a company to earn turnover and fulfill social duties at the same time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18735933088 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5776682382 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159189121954 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560791845101 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583247682924 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899410487759 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035775420833 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.