What problems have mass media created nowadays? Can you come up with the solutions for these problems?
With the advances in technology, especially internet, it cannot be easier for people to reach the first-hand information. However, the more accessible medias become, the more troubles will be triggered. In this essay, the problems resulting from mass medias are identified, and viable solutions to alleviate them are suggested as well.
First and foremost, certain significant annoyances have arisen concerning about how mass medias affect people. The main issue is the invasion of privacy, specifically, paparazzi are always determined to get a story of celebrities at any cost. Even an ordinary person involving in the current affairs could be the target of the media due to the public’s insatiable appetite. Furthermore, the news medias often exaggerate the truth in pursuit of high audience ratings. Several journalists probable distort the facts and mislead the public in order to aid and abet people or organizations charged with crimes. In short, as a consequence of above reasons, the mass medias have become less trustworthy.
Nevertheless, there are certain actions could be taken to mitigate aforementioned problems. Viewers have a responsibility to choose the reliable sources of information to keep themselves up to date with the latest news. Moreover, governments may raise citizens’ awareness to avoid untrustworthy channels through traditional ones. They are also responsible for fining the medias exaggerating the magnitude of the real troubles so that people could access to the high-quality coverage of news easily. By and large, it is quite difficult to get rid of the mentioned issues but audiences can decide to expose to a wealth of information from dependable sources.
In conclusion, mass medias have given rise to a variety of pressing issues. It is highly advisable that governments and citizens take appropriate measures to combat the situation/ Feasible solutions include raising people’s awareness about the problems and restricting erroneous medias.
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Suggestion:
...lems and restricting erroneous medias.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, in short, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62171052632 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15944143866 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641447368421 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0730821821 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230746813612 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654435719452 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539017546569 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13571573679 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321542101468 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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