In what ways should imports and exports be adjusted to increase your country's efficiency and effectiveness in the world marketplace?
In the era of globalisation, foreign trading has become crucial part to improve country's economy. Correct utilisation of imports and exports can lead a country to its path of prosperity.
First of all, export and import must be balanced to ensure dependency and stability. If import exceeds export, nation goes into debt whilst becomes heavily dependent on others. Vice versa, plethora of export only means poor management of what we earn from other countries to efficiently serve society. It is a waste of resources in this case.
Secondly, exportation should only be national trademark, namely handicrafts or textiles, which can be produced at low cost with labours and materials advantage. This gives not only an edge of in negotiation for setting exporting price but also enhance local images which can be used to promote tourism. The prime example of this is China where labour wage is amongst the lowest in the world. Coupling with its vast lands, major corporations such as Intel, Samsung, Apple etc. compete to build manufacturing lines.
Thirdly, consumable goods should not be one of the primary importing merchandises. The reason is that expendable products are not sustainable. After consumption, we will not have any mean to replenish stock other than importing from outside which will occur repeatedly thus being reliable on other countries. A better choice of importation is technology and human capital. These resources can be multiplied and induce self-manufacturing.
To recapitulate, in the age of fierce competition caused by globalisation, utilising and managing international trading is the only key to achieve effective growth and expansion.
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Essay evaluation report
has become crucial part to improve country's economy.
has become a/the crucial part to improve country's economy.
which can be produced at low cost
which can be produced at a low cost
This gives not only an edge of in negotiation for setting exporting price but also enhance local images //need to be parallel
This not only gives an edge of in negotiation for setting exporting price but also enhances local images
This gives not only an edge of in negotiation for setting exporting price but also enhanced local images
Sentence: This gives not only an edge of in negotiation for setting exporting price but also enhance local images which can be used to promote tourism.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to of and in
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 261 350
No. of Characters: 1371 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.019 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.253 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.937 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.987 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42528735632 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06408027861 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704980842912 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4044111118 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24784505053 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660691503302 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533332628169 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118950602868 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519751926058 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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