When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that the size of the payment offered is the key factor when applying for a position. However, I firmly believe that apart from money, there are also some things that should be taken into consideration, including the working environment.
There is no doubt that wages are necessary for people to meet their needs. A well-paid job will provide employees an opportunity to have a high quality of life. For example, earning a big sum of salary enables people to pay for health care, education, housing… with a higher standard. On the other hand, people selecting careers based on their passions sometimes find it hard to cover their expenses. They oftens have to deal with financial burden as their jobs do not offer them with enough money to live comfortably.
However, the atmosphere in the workplace is just as fundamental as the monetary aspect. Working in a harmonious working environment can boost productivity and enjoyment towards the positions. For instance, being on good terms with the managers or colleagues may reduce the possibility of getting stressed at work, thus the staff can do their jobs more efficiently and willingly. In addition, accomplishments in occupation would result in a high sense of satisfaction. People will feel happy for the experiences they possess or the professional achievements they have, which is more important than the amount of money they earn.
In conclusion, while finance is absolutely vital when deciding on future careers, it seems to me that other stimulus such as working atmosphere should also be contemplated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atmosphere should also be contemplated.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1583011583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92782242021 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5688576201 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769820982835 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238559556811 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244013387544 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419374592809 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128512529482 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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