When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It sometimes would be argued that when people decide to apply a job, they depend excessive on the salary. I do not totally agree with this opinion.
It is really true that high salary impacts definitely on people”s lives. Firstly, money today plays a prime role, it helps people feel comfortable and has a good standard of living. Especially, the cost living now is higher and higher while people must expenditure on so many items to boost their life. As a result, the employees need salary to cover their needs. Secondly, as a normal worker, people have to work about 8 hours per day. It is obvious that acquiring their hands full is required by any job and all the things they received is the salary, so, for them, it is not only something that rises their budget but also is a motivation to stimulate them to work harder and harder for reaching the goal of life.
However, salary, for a part of people, is not much and those people find their job basing on other aspects. A lot of worker seem to focus more on the job satisfaction because they need to pursue this job a long of their life so it would be more beneficial if they did a job that make them enable to show their abilities and follow their passion instead of doing the job which they are not very interested in. On the other hand, some people want to devote one”life toward society, therefore they also have other standard to choose their job. These people tend to priority to social works, such as, working in a charity or public organisation by government.
In conclusion, although I agree that salary is one of the most important purpose, nevertheless, it is not the only one consideration when a person finding a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would sometimes be
It sometimes would be argued that when people decide to apply...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rder and harder for reaching the goal of life. However, salary, for a part of pe...
^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties and follow their passion instead of doing the job which they are not very in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59016393443 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52687994945 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3050600624 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161611177682 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606201482928 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669325761105 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133331027754 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761731435994 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.