When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, under the impact of the fourth industrial revolution, human life has become more and more comfortable and convenient; however, when high technologies have been equipped and upgraded in all aspects of a nation and its society, the traditional skills and ways of life have been gradually eliminated. Whether maintaining of these old-fashioned skills and lifestyles is beneficial to a country is caused controversy. In my opinion, they are probably old-fashioned but still worth preserving due to several following reasons.
First, old-style works and habits help people have a healthier life. Specifically, without modern gadgets, children have more time to spend on good routine like sports enhancing muscle and stamina instead of stitching their eyes to screens, consuming convenient food and staying up late, which in long term would cause a lot of physical problems such as: weak immune system, obesity, diabetes or cardiovascular diseases.
Next, skills and lifeways in the past support everybody develop soft skills and positive character. For example, when doing something manually, people have more time to share feelings while interacting and discussing how to finish the job faster and perfectly (interpersonal skills), or each individual could learn how to fulfill their role and surpass their ego (teamwork skills). Moreover, a life without high-tech tools and with just simple things, a person, especially kids, could learn many approaches to overcome difficulties or trouble creatively and independently (problem-solving skills) like preparing a simple meal when starving or fixing a wooden toy. Only with a simple lifestyle, a man could grow up completely with a strong self-esteem and the sympathy to everyone.
Unfortunately, old skills and ways of living caused many drawbacks to some people who want to have a dynamic life which require an innovative and fastest method to process a job or a massive productivity; nevertheless, we are hardly busy all time and if job is so stressful and life is too aggressive, gardening or sending a written letter to an acquaintance might relieve our pressures.
In short, evidences show that near-out-date skills and old lifestyles are still beneficial to human life despite the great impact of the automation era. Their positive effects on one’s health or emotional life as well as social skills are indisputable and I believe if using appropriately, technologies to some extent could boost and spread out the value of traditional skills and ways of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for example, in short, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 10.4138276553 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44416243655 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06243385575 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611675126904 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.321413909 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189688745467 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676841454166 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444499597712 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986039870772 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056546296154 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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