Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is a little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that the media influences our life and opinions. In some countries, the media is controlled exclusively by large companies, in other it is the government that has this control. Neverthless, whoever manages the social media can also manage opinions and attitudes of the public is still a controversial issue. In my opinion, I agree with this idea at extend some but I think that it depends on people who has followed the social information.
On the one hand, whoever can control the media also has ultimate control over that is published or broadcasted and what is ommited. They can also add some positive or neative ideas of certain news stories depending on this own feelings about the matter. Therefore, readers' feelings will be follow this news. This is not a new problem, although the issue is perhaps more pressing now that the Internet or TV has allowed these massages to be disseminated even furthur.
On the other hand, we should remember that readers have their own ideas and opinions. You can control what is printed but cannot control opinions and attitudes of your readers. For example, Donal Trump, wants to be the next president of the United States of America, even he is among the richest men in this world. Although being a owner of a lot of TV channels, he cannot take advantages of them to have the public's trust. In addition, people seem to be much more cynical about what they read in the newspaper or hear on the television especially when it comes to the tabloid. In other words, readers can kow they may be being lied to.
In concluions, readers should control their feelings when read a newspaper and they can realise that it's a real news or just lied to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...chest men in this world. Although being a owner of a lot of TV channels, he canno...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ers can kow they may be being lied to. In concluions, readers should control thei...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...d a newspaper and they can realise that its a real news or just lied to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70568561873 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56190783877 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2524762185 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390619635326 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125058916808 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104063280831 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222375096865 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878532661168 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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