Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude females from certain professions because of their gender.
It is natural that men and women differ from each other in terms of strengths and weaknesses. Therefore , women tend to do particular jobs due to their feminine character. Some would argue that it is appropriate to exclude women from certain kind of works. I agree with this view and will discuss the reasons in this essay.
Firstly, women are weaker than male in terms of physical strengths. Therefore, women should be encouraged to do less hard and difficult works such as washing, cooking and cleaning whilst men do physical works such as building, mining and excavating which require enormous energy and persistence. Though it is argued by many that this is against the freedom of choice for women but I firmly believe that vulnerability of women should be assessed in the right way.
Secondly, an allowance to carry out hard works leads to losing women's delicate appeal. If they earn masculine character it will be annoying and they will lose their values as mother, daughter or girlfriend. Therefore,women should not be allowed to engage in performing certain tasks.
Finally, the consequences of carrying out duties which demand physical power and if done by women leads to misunderstanding of couples in dividing household works. As a result, men would prefer to live alone and not to be managed by women who do all hard works in a house. To prevent such conflicts, women should not be engaged in certain professions.
In conclusion, I view that women should not be asked to do works in several areas due to the fact of their tenderness and to prevent conflicts between husband and wife. What is more, such works might cause women to lose their beauty and charm.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238853503185 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.175159235669 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0987261146497 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0350318471338 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414012738854 0.0437548338989 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127388535032 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0477707006369 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69070200052 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0477707006369 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00636942675159 0.00163938923432 389% => OK
Determiners: 0.0445859872611 0.0861772015684 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0350318471338 0.021408717616 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127388535032 0.011925033212 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1698.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93706293706 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335664335664 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237762237762 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101398601399 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69070200052 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.1201535777 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6774273308 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.8428904429 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.64556962025 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378288248406 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751520028165 0.102741220458 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0917279629998 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548356044346 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125491322213 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155356426036 0.134430193775 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768200730328 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342631037202 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0996352063043 0.0638462369009 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251240742928 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755099984932 0.058150111329 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.