The world has seen an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flights should be taxed more?
Lately, the usage of aeroplanes has soared substantially for commercial and social affairs due to many productive reasons. However, every rose has its thorns, which are capable of being removed by levying additional taxes on airlines.
Airlines are the wings of trade. As businesses are enabled to penetrate the global market, now a variety of services and products are available at consumers' disposal backed by the visible hand of airlines. Furthermore, aviation is encouraging tourism and bolstering national economies. Presently tourism is not only allowing national and international tourists to venture in the geographically isolated wilderness, but it is also promoting the foreign exchange. Perhaps, which had not been possible without the advent of aeroplanes.
However, nothing comes without imperfections. Damage to the environment is the principal outcome of aviation. Aeroplanes discharge greenhouse gasses in abundance, which is not only expediting global warming but also degrading air quality. Besides, flights are troublesome for people who may or may not use the services of airlines. People living in the vicinity of an airport are bound to suffer by extensive noise pollution, especially causing problems to children and aged adults. Uncertain and Unreliable are the strongest suits of the aviation industry. As air transport is uncertain and unreliable as it is controlled to a great extent by weather conditions, so unfavourable weather such as fog, snow or heavy rain may cause cancellation of scheduled flights and suspension of air service
Subjective taxation can help in killing two birds with one stone. Excessive tax on every type of flight can cripple the aviation and other associated industries, so only those flight journeys which are avoidable must be taxed highly. Besides, shifting to biofuels would grant a new lease of life to airlines.
Although aviation is serving many recreational and social purposes, the authority has to design some policies to counter the negatives of air flying to use the aeroplanes more effectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as to, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53459119497 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02679122701 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6550174387 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107441799464 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254968205315 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402139576017 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533659518487 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361135372813 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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