Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Computers have increasingly been one of the most useful devices nowadays. Some people suppose that the item is the most crucial creation of humans in the last ten decades. Indeed, I totally agree that this invention is so vital for work, study and recreation. This essay will first look at how PCs can enhance the efficiency of learning and then discuss how the important the device is in terms of entertainment.
I strongly believe that learning or working will be more efficient if people know how to make good use of PCs. Take having a course named Thesis in the Ho Chi Minh City International University of Vietnam where I attended for example. Most of the essay samples, theories, and step-by-step procedures are available online for students. This means that all materials including lectures can be easily accessed by having an account and Internet connection. This approach has saved valuable time for transportation and frequent attendance of not only the learners but also the lecturers.
In addition, I can safely say that PCs can also be utilized for entertainment. It is because a number of game developers have created numerous exciting games which can be played on the device. Even better, several online games have been organized for global competitions with the prize of thousands of dollars. This has shown that computer games are well recognized as a major means of recreation.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that since the popularity of computers, they have played a vital role in terms of work, study, and recreation in society. To be more specific, the item has enhanced the efficiency of education as well as grown to be a popular way of entertainment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96819787986 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88253035688 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2282391423 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134614300811 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494856454921 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025025252689 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799885093562 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339600414891 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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