Write an essay to an educational reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas.
Studying abroad is a good way to enhance your knowledge and make your CV looks more impressive. Nevertheless, there are also some negatives of educating in a different nation. Looking at this trend, we will analyze the pros and cons of this new tendency.
To begin with, attaining overseas education develops new personal skills. Abilities such as being confident, independent, or creative can be acquired as we fly to other countries alone and can be useful for seeking a high-paying job. Moreover, we can gain the opportunity to explore other countries' traditions and learn about new cultures. Since we are living in a foreign country, we can absorb its traditions and share them with our friends, spreading the culture to more people.
However, approaching an alternative study system has its downsides. First, if you are unable to cope with the new environment, you may get culture shock. Some countries’ traditions can turn out to be unusual, which can be difficult for some individuals to adapt to. In addition, some have to suffer from stress, anxiety, or depression. Many students have a feeling of being isolated because of troubles like the language barrier, making it hard to communicate with other citizens. Furthermore, the price of staying overseas is often very expensive. Although you can attempt to get a scholarship for the school which you pursue, it is uncommon and sometimes requires study achievements or the certification of the field you are learning.
In summary, there are many advantages for the students who got their university degree abroad compared to those who stay in their own country. They learn new things and different cultures, and they develop themselves personally. Nonetheless, they may have to deal with negative feelings and may need sustainable finance to educate in another country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, in addition, in summary, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21283783784 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91907336616 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6636536795 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083696722495 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030835731061 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462912705074 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461183229901 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145808677758 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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