Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.
How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Many people believe that the increase in car purchases over 30 years is responsible for traffic congestions in many cities. For me, I think that this statement is completely correct because cars are causing many more troubles in our daily life than their merits and there are many ways that government can tackle this critical issue.
Although car is a very convenient vehicle, they generate many problems such as traffic jams. The number of car has been increasing significantly over 30 years and the rate is much higher than the speed of urban infrastructure development. As a result, many cities overload with cars and traffic congestions slowly become normal in those locations. Another evidence worth mentioning is pollution. According to my province’s recent research, the majority of carbon dioxide emitted in last year was from the use of means of transport. If a modern city polluted with contaminated air, it is possibly because it has too many vehicles in it. If the number of cars keeps raising, soon we will have no space for other activities.
In order to address this issue, government needs to have some practical solutions and two of them are public transport improvement and city improvement. Many residents in big cities claimed that they were afraid of buses because they were dirty and the service was bad. Given this, government should invest more money in upgrading the quality of public transport as well as training employees properly. The second solution is to improve the city infrastructure. Government is encouraged to expand the major roads or streets and create enough space for car park. If they don’t do it fast, soon we will have daily traffic jams because of some random cars park in the streets.
In conclusion, the statement is correct because it reflexes the reality and the government should take actions as soon as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rnment can tackle this critical issue. Although car is a very convenient vehicl...
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...ll have no space for other activities. In order to address this issue, governme...
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...hould take actions as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05161290323 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73677693115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0369325809 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19084453085 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595517167154 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393971271556 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114458991259 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499804101828 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.