You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Advertising should be regulated.
Nowadays, advertisements are the most strategy of marketing and promoting products or services. It has brought significant change for pattern expenditure and consumption of society. Although, there some people believe that advertising a product has a good idea, while others think that it will bring a bad impact on society.
On one hand, advertising is an effective way to spread awareness among people about good quality and healthy products. It offers a description of wide variety categories of goods which let people decide to purchase what they like. Moreover, it helps to educate the society about health and safety issues such as use bicycles instead of cars. Additionally, it is the best way to raise the demand for new products.
On the other hand, it may stimulate people for spending money for unnecessary things. As a result, some shopping market makes an especial discount during the year, it can defiantly encourage consumers buying many things. Another disadvantage is people are always misguided and cheated by the tricks of these advertisements. The reason for this, there are so many companies providing exaggerated and unrealistic reviews for their products.
In conclusion, certainly, advertisements are an important way to make profits of production and innovation of goods. Nevertheless, some of them have a negative side of society. In my opinion, although advertisements have a negative and positive side of society, I strongly believe that its positive impacts are influenced more than its negative impact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ives impact overweight its negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15681297167 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9705949518 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149720617765 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461923787884 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278846761391 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823553635145 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173740165844 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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