You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent d | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

On the day and age, although had many budget for poorer nations were given from other wealth nations, it does not effective support. Hence, many people hold the point of view that another types of support should give to the poverty stricken countries. From my perspective, I had a strongly agree with that idea and the reasons will be explained by the following paragraph.

At the beginning, developed countries should help by items such as food, water or medicine for poverty countries. Although that idea may not to help that countries which recieved sponsor, that can help the life of their citizens. Besides, the living standard of people in poorer nations will improve to higher level and solve. For example, in 1976, Vietnam was recieved many relief items from others countries such as Russia, Cuba or China to help citilazations escape out from indigence by war. That was take many merit for Vietnam in that poverty period instead of money.

At the second that, another types of aid for poorer nations such as kwonledge, technology or science may take more merits than demerits. For the explain, when the child of poverty countries can approach to education and the kwonledge, they will to be smart and intellegent. That also support very much for the countries which give the aid in the both future and current. Besides, the countries give many technology and kwonledge may reduce the illiterate more than that of countries give financial aid. For example, nowadays, many developed countries choose the solution that give more technology like mobilephone, internat and kwonledge aid such as science, teacher to help poverty countries. Hence, many poorer nations were improve the living standard and reduce illiteracy very much.

In conclusion, the financial aid is very important but if we give another types of help also take many merit than that of money. Therefore, I had agree with the idea that developed countries should give other types of help to improve the living standard of poverty countries.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
...ut from indigence by war. That was take many merit for Vietnam in that poverty period inst...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...may take more merits than demerits. For the explain, when the child of poverty countries ca...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun technology seems to be countable; consider using: 'many technologies'.
Suggestion: many technologies
...nd current. Besides, the countries give many technology and kwonledge may reduce the illiterate...
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Line 5, column 727, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ntries. Hence, many poorer nations were improve the living standard and reduce illitera...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
...we give another types of help also take many merit than that of money. Therefore, I had ag...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...it than that of money. Therefore, I had agree with the idea that developed countries ...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...it than that of money. Therefore, I had agree with the idea that developed countries ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07207207207 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50978120648 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441441441441 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6606105319 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337307038284 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129142182614 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947269962813 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232155947552 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091878090651 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments