You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Museums and art galleries serve as a place where people can gather knowledge and education about their history, culture, and heritage. Many museums and art galleries in the world set entrance fees for the general public as well as the tourists whereas others do not charge any. Although charging people to gain entrance can have several drawbacks, I believe the advantages of having entry fees far outweigh the disadvantage.
Art galleries and museums are a massive repository of knowledge and help to educate people if they have free access. The main reason behind this is common people will be more interested and attracted to this facility having no entry free. Moreover, many students and researchers go to these places to complete their study assignments or research, and thus they can benefit hugely. From society’s perspective, people will be well known and informed about their heritage and culture and can represent their country properly. Additionally, these institutes can serve their purpose of educating people and gain the satisfaction of fulfilling all the purposes.
Despite having the aforementioned advantages of free entrance, I think there should fees to get admission to these facilities for many reasons. First of all, these fees can create a source of income for these museums and galleries which they can spend on the maintenance of facilities and covering the overhead cost like personnel, heat, water, and electricity. In addition, without relying on government funding they can design, decorate and present their facility with more resources, information, and advanced technologies when they have extra money on hand. For example, the Royal Tyrrell Museum of Drumheller works with the dinosaur, investing their earnings from the museum more on research and development of fossils and thus gaining more attraction to the tourism industry. Hence, the learning becomes more effective and up to date.
In conclusion, though free entry to any museum and art galleries can have lots of positive effects I am in favor of having admission fees. It might seem a little expensive at first but eventually, the experience and learning will be far more extensive and vast in long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... in the world set entrance fees for the general public as well as the tourists whereas others ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar more extensive and vast in long run.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28409090909 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76801364432 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.201814017 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245407862073 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903841426988 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845466397955 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161165439348 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612404754451 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.