You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Wealth gives a vast range of autonomy to an individual regarding spending. It is often argued by many that possession of money is the most significant factor for people to contribute to other's life. I strongly disagree with this point of view, as I believe that besides financial assistance, mental and emotional support can sometimes provide people with more satisfaction, while also making a significant contribution to society as a whole.
First of all, there Is a wide range of necessities and demands circulating us besides financial aid. This means to say, in different phages of life, people face various types of circumstances, and thus the help they need also varies. A wealthy person may have the liberty to spend his earnings to help anyone monetarily but if the assistance is mental or emotional support then any common member of the society or community can offer their hand. For example, a sick individual on a hospital bed appreciates a call or a visit to ask about his well-being way more than just offering some money for treatment. Moreover, the mental support which embraces a person also potentiates to build trust in humanity. Therefore, mental and emotional care is regarded as important to help others too.
Furthermore, another important thing to consider in respect to help society to be a human. This is because humanity is an essential character to have for any human of any civilized country. Due to this virtue of humans, the world is a beautiful living place. World's developed nation, for example, for decades contributing towards the medical assistance to poor nations so that at least one of their basic human rights which is health can be protected. It is not only the money that has made the difference but also their kindness and understanding.
In conclusion, it is illogical to suggest that the rich can help others due to their possession of money as there are other qualities of human-like kindness, and understanding of a person's need also matters. I recommend that people need to have a human mind the most to offer help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...man-like kindness, and understanding of a persons need also matters. I recommend that peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95402298851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85459255222 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8572009858 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212337600712 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661982831075 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375700617668 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12640505733 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150715173462 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.