You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Along with the development of the school system, many issues are occurring with both students and teachers, including bullying, the most serious problem at school today. The following essay will identify the possible causes of this phenomenon as well as present some appropriate solutions.
To start with, bullying is a growing concern in many schools and it happens for many reasons. First of all, students' family environment is a feature that can easily transform them into bullies. When the parents use violence to gain control over the family, children are likely to think of this behavior as an effective way to bolster their social standing at school and imitate their parents. Having been over-indulged by the close family members, the bully has acquainted with doing whatever they please, so they can use the way of victimizing other people to achieve their wanted goals. Secondly, it is inadequacy, jealousy, and depression that turn youngsters into the kind of people who lack empathy and compassion for everyone. Compared with other better students, the bullies seem to resent the more attention others may have than they do. Therefore, to reduce the popularity of victims or make up for their emotional deprivation, many individuals bully others. Likewise, the bullies often spread deceptive rumors or throw dirty things into their targeted people.
Besides the aforementioned causes, some practical solutions should be taken into consideration to ensure students' security.The first one is that anti-bullying should be added to schools' curriculum, including lessons about anger management, conflict resolutions, and sympathy for other children. Setting a policy related to bullying and a scale of disciplinary actions is in the need to stop the problem before it starts and prevent the bully from reoccur. Not only could the school system eradicate this matter but families of the young generation can also empower and encourage their children to escape the wrong way. Parental solutions involve setting clear limits for youngsters from an early age, regularly confiding in children, and soon recognizing warning signs to provide them with professional counseling. As an example, ignoring teachers, ridiculing, and teasing others might be illustrations of rude signs. By contrast, if our children are subject to be bullied, parents should document the situation and submit a complaint to our children's school.
To sum up, various measures can be taken to tackle the problem of bullying in many schools today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nsideration to ensure students security.The first one is that anti-bullying should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, first of all, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40506329114 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79173592176 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610126582278 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0442511056 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.588235294 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180527405803 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572494979404 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358255751613 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116546906896 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00553233980353 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.