You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words.
Some parents prefer to have their children be raised by their grandparents. Some prefer to raise them on their own. Which would you prefer & why?.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are some individuals who advocate for their children to be guided by their grandparents while some argue to depend solely on parental guidance. In this essay, both perspectives will be explained followed by my personal preference.
Regarding the grandparents, they are generally considered as more experienced in caretaking and richer in life experiences in general. Since they had encountered struggles and difficulties in dealing with their own child, the grandparents may find it easier to be more level-headed and efficient in dealing with child-related issues. For instance, taking a third-person's outlook, the grandparents can help the children to realize their parental love for me whereby parents get occupied with their job. Moreover, the old people, in general, are regarded as the link between the past and the future. By being nursed by the grandparents, the youngster will be provided with life-experience short stories, moral concepts, and a glimpse of their past. There is also a tendency that the child would be more open-minded to the new concepts, and develop more curiosity about the events happening around them. In addition, some studies showed that the youngsters raised by grandparents are said to be more empathetic and understanding compared to their counterparts.
On the other hand, it is also acceptable that some parents claim the sole responsibility to raise their own children because of the following reasons. Firstly, these parents are generally individual adults who are capable of taking care of their own child and carrying out their job simultaneously. In fact, although it is natural to let the child spend some time with their grandparents, giving the whole role of caretaker is a different matter. The grandparents, who mostly are in their 60s or 80s, have already worked diligently throughout their life, and their adult years ought to be a time when they can finally find inner peace. Therefore, considering the hard work they have done enough, parents are reluctant to put their children together with grandparents. Secondly, the rapport between family members is supposed to be strong and it has to be stronger when it comes to immediate relatives. By spending more time with the offspring, the bond between the parents and the child gets stronger which consequences in better relations between them. In addition, the parents have lived the adjacent timeline with their child which makes it easier to give guidance to them since there is a narrower generation gap.
To conclude, either parenting by grandparents or by the parents has their respective positive impact on the child. From my personal point of view, it would be a better choice for parents to raise their children on their own while allowing interaction with grandparents since they have the sole guardians of the offspring.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 455.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25714285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97859367612 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501098901099 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.623210934 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.894736842 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9473684211 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309957788271 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112038133519 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671684979436 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227372833141 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276707261868 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.