The present generation is a combination of smart and thoughtful life. This makes them understand the influence easier. To be precise, the young group likes doing what they love. The same enthusiasm and energy is found in their own age group. Influence and interest arises with the behaviour pattern of the crowd we spend most time with.
In this fast processing world , it is hard to get well with everything that we opt for. While dealing with any situation, one always likes to have a supporting hand. And, here comes the closed ones who have been dealing with their daily pattern. Friends are considered a blessing in every situation in this modern world.
One can feel hard to share the situations with elders , but feel free while being with a friend. The major reason can be the age factor or the experience that have been felt by the seniors. We tend to connect ourselves easily to our group sharing every joy and pain. But, it is quite opposite while we are trying to convey our emotions to elders. The fear factor, the taunts and the reactions from the teachers makes us to avoid any relevant relation. Meanwhile it is quite opposite with our company around us .
Thus , I would wrap up my essay agreeing on the fact about this generation being more influenced by their friends rather than teachers or parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73593073593 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38094898359 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3207267747 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.375 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131953212893 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378936587353 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582707009636 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974671436878 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811794049788 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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