The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled while at the same time the military services are in need of people Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

While selecting candidates, companies often focus on their personalities than the skill set. Being a good person itself make candidates suitable for the institution, but work skills are essential to full fill the tasks in a perfect way.
Firstly, personality is the identity of each person, hence interviewers targets the best one. A good person will have necessery qualities which will help the institution and the person himself exponentially. For example, coping up with institutional rules and regulations. In addition these people will have good conduct and moral values which are vital for each companies. Secondly, a good person will be loyal to the institution. Higher authorities can trust him in sophisticated and confidential operations. Researches proves that people with certain type of personalities are the assets for the hiring organisations; these people are loyal and resourceful. Finally, good persons can maintain a good and healthy work atmosphere which are crucial for any institution.
On the other hand, Work skills are inevitable part which can't be excluded at any cost. Skilled labourers are the important part of each company, without them the productivity will be reduced. each job needs certain kind of skills, which need to be ensured during staff selection. For example, for mechanical enjeneers, needs skills to operates machines. coming next skilled people only can finish certain jobs accurately and perfectly. Some machineries needs extreme precision and perfections; for example vehicle engines and breaks. If the mechanic is not skilled to do this things it will result in catastrophic disasters.
Overall, good personality and work skills are two sides of a coin, hence both requirements are essential and concidered accordingly while staff selection. proper balance of both these traits make the work environment and productivity conciderably.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (10 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02158843892 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6106471776 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418873381952 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016694853579 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192196015717 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271157744629 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178534909473 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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