Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the midst of techonology-driven era, there are a widespread in the number of available translation software across the globe. In spite of these meaningful features, studying and mastering a exotic language could still be advantageous for each individuals. I personally give a green light to this option and my rational conclusion about this social phenomenon will be reached in the following essay.
First and foremost, I believe that spending time to practice a new language can bring many merits to our life. To be clear, people don't need to depend on the technological gadgets when communicate with the foreign. Moreover, in some emergency situation, these equipment do not work and we can be seemed to be hopeless without their existence. Secondly, once we explore or learn a language, we surely develop our intelligence and widen our horizon. Mastering language is not only simple like study a subject in school but also know more about the overseas culture, tradition, custome. Our perception can be expanded to the novel things and life become more colorful and meaningful. Thirdly, using a translation website is quite time-consuming for our daily activities which related to foreign language such as watching movies, listening to music,... It is undoubted that the people who excel in learning language can be more profound than the others.
Following that, taking spare time to study new language can help each individual have more opportunities in their career path. It is hardly unaccepted that a person who uses foreign language fluently can be seen more professional than the others. Subsequently, everything in this globalized age almost require people to understand foreign language even a little bit such as English. Taking for an instance, English gradually become a common language all over the world. Knowing English can help we make more new friends over the world and can access many activities in our life.
In conclusion, despite the influence of translation, exploring new language can bring many positive effect not only to our career but also the routine acitivity. I wholeheartedly agree that the advantages of studying language can ameliorate our attainments and cognition and outweigh the functions of others equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ingful features, studying and mastering a exotic language could still be advantag...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...merits to our life. To be clear, people dont need to depend on the technological gad...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'these equipments'?
Suggestion: this equipment; these equipments
... Moreover, in some emergency situation, these equipment do not work and we can be seemed to be ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as watching movies, listening to music,... It is undoubted that the people who e...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...e to understand foreign language even a little bit such as English. Taking for an instance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3008356546 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9894562584 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576601671309 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3407947735 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.722222222 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180041966856 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060238095198 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464244377407 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116808725393 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507764336047 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.