Are zoos cruel to wild animals? Discuss
Zoo showcases exotic wild animals in captivity for human beings to learn and observe the behaviors of the animal. Few modern zoos are alike natural reserve, providing the habitat equivalent to forest to feral animals.There are ambivalent views on this issue which is deliberated in following essay.
Animals are exhibited in a confinement and profited by putting the animal’s condition on ticket. Ferocious cats like Lion and Tigers are often seen trotting up and down looking distressed in their cage. Many zoos feed their animals with packaged and frozen meat and with no room for exercise, the animal’s average lifespan tends to reduce compared to those living in wild. Also, the animal loses natural instinct to hunt and becomes vulnerable when released back in the wild. Further, it is hard to detect the animal’s distress in their enclosure. Recently, the entire stingray population at the Brookfield Zoo's Stingray Bay habitat died due to a drop in the oxygen level inside the exhibit. o exhibit rare extraordinary species of animals, special focus lights are installed in their pen, which may increase anxiety levels of the animals and it may suffer some health issue. To add to the plight of these animals, there is no upkeep of proper sanitation.
However, not all zoos disregard the well-being of the animals. Some curators offer safe captive breeding, which would otherwise lead to the extinction of the species, if left alone in the wild. For example, Chinese zoos are making tremendous efforts to preserve the endangered population of Giant Panda listed on Red List of threatened species. The animals kept in captive are safe from the harsh conditions and their predators, which will help them to reproduce their species in sustainable numbers. Another positive aspects of the zoos are they are seen as educational resources for children and teachers. These captivities bring animal and nature closer to the human being and create awareness of the conservation programs. There are times when wounded animals are rescued from poachers and nurtured in these man sanctuaries.
Based on the aforementioned discussion, zoos do provide protection and shelter to animals but at the same time could also take away their freedom and leave them vulnerable without being in captivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17989417989 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64583682736 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589947089947 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7309404875 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.052631579 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244194809109 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767215809401 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543180734498 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166785951709 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472565318103 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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