Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Contemporary psychologists claim that people today are tending to feel important and rich. These are two main reasons that could fulfill their potential and allows them to feel happy. Lots of youth try to succeed in different branches of art in order to become a famous person. It’s not easy, but some of them who have a talent or financial support achieve their goals. As a result, a new born celebrity has a fame, glory, money, but… he doesn’t count himself happy. Why does it happen? In following assay, I will explain main drawbacks of celebrity’s life.
First of all, it’s very important fact that famous people won’t never feel hungry, will able to live in comfort and luxuries, afford any of entertainment they want. You can also afford a good medical treatment, there is no need to stay in hospital queues, because you will probably have could help you everywhere. At this point, advantages of celebrity’s life are over.
The matter is that the purpose of everyone’s life is leaving own posterity. How we can do it if you will always busy with different shows, concerts, interviews et cetera. It’s a well-known fact that a lot of popular people have problems with their own children. Most of them coursed a simple lack of time to spent with own offspring. The second thing is that famous people don’t have a private life at all. They have been persecuted for all their life by media. Everything that happens in their private life will be instantly spread through TV, radio or internet.
As a result, such way of life leads us to give up on our main life values for money and fame. In my opinion, it’s quite selfish. We all need to earn money for our families’ sake, but there is need to collect more money than we actually need.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217948717949 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.158974358974 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282051282051 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0820512820513 0.0437548338989 188% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107692307692 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0179487179487 0.0403226058552 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74961329426 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0025641025641 0.00163938923432 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564102564103 0.0861772015684 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230769230769 0.021408717616 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102564102564 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83171521036 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320388349515 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229773462783 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142394822006 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119741100324 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74961329426 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.4198780642 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.45 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4426374558 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 38.4273462783 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.27619047619 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102592513512 0.332605444948 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0675376434253 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671234000908 0.0668466124924 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.413982374989 0.534860350844 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132533286618 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340626361683 0.134430193775 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269695472863 0.0742795772207 36% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26098117863 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.066275692349 0.0638462369009 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658170178351 0.228012699653 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106213423431 0.058150111329 18% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.