Nowadays, being a celebrity is a concept that many people, especially teenagers, wish to be. However, I believe this social status brings with it more negative than positive ramification. It will be shown in this essay.
First of all, celebrities have many difficulties in their personal life due to the fact that their day-to-day life is invaded by paparazzi. Since, it is a common scene to see a celebrity accompany by many journalists and photographers wherever they are. This phenomenon would bring about many problems to their family life. For instance, this year an Iranian superstar, who won Grammy prize, got divorce because of myriad reports and pictures which were published in magazines about he and his female counterpart in a movie. This trend leaded his wife to became suspicious about their relation and finally decided to get divorce. As this example shows, being a celebrity makes it difficult to manage personal life.
In addition to this, celebrities have to perform a prescribed social conduct, unless they wish to be censured by society. As people always monitor them and expected them to behave in a manner they recognize as acceptable. take Michael Jackson as an example. In last years of his life, media convicted him for child abuse, just because he was so kind to children and cultivated a close relationship with them. although this claim never been legally proved, everyone spoke about it that time. Even when he denied this claim, many people did not believe him. This shows how celebrities have no freedom for their social interactions.
All in all, after analyzing the negative aspects of being a celebrity, I believe these drawbacks would shed light on any probable advantages this status brings with it. It is recommended to educate celebrities about these problems in order to help them tackle these issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tionship with them. although this claim never been legally proved, everyone spoke about it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08552631579 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70978967698 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1323971415 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185459087566 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635183080067 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600182969688 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133736027549 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630090936455 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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