Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefit.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Nowadays, everybody wants to be famous and desire the attention of media, so that he/she may be widely known amongst people. Though being a celebrity such as film stars and sports personality has its own benefits as well as a lot of problems. I will discuss both the aspects in order.
Being a celebrity has multiple benefits. Firstly, it's the popularity, as people across the country or in some cases across the globe get to know about the famous people or stars. With this advantage, they can share their thoughts, ideas and aims with the people via electronic, print and social media. Secondly, it's the element of respect as film stars and sports personalities have been treated with respect around the world. For Instance, Mr. Imran Khan, the Ex-Captain of Pakistan Cricket team. Who led the victorious team in 1992 Cricket World Cup. He is being treated with a lot of respect in the country. Lastly, it's the financial benefits, mostly film stars and sportspersons are millionaires . They tend to live wealthy, healthy and glamorous life.
On the other side, the problems entail the following. First of all, the celebrities usually donot have their personal lives. As they are always surrounded by media and journalists as well as general public. Consequently, they could not spend their quality time with their families. Furthermore, famous people in almost all the industries have to ultimately retire or go off. Subsequently, they go to stress as they could not have the glamour again. For example, the famous singer, Micheal Jackson is one of the celebrity who ended up in stress and mental illness.
In summation, after analyzing both the aspects, it can be argued that being a celebrity has more benefits than problems. However, one should be prepared for the ultimate ending as the fame does not always remain the same.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262108262108 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.128205128205 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0598290598291 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0655270655271 0.0501214627716 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048433048433 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122507122507 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61780944579 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.014245014245 0.0326793684256 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00569800569801 0.00163938923432 348% => OK
Determiners: 0.0940170940171 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019943019943 0.021408717616 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00569800569801 0.011925033212 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1843.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98376623377 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366883116883 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243506493506 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168831168831 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12012987013 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61780944579 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 64.5869380423 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1316837788 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7619047619 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 39.0173160173 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.74117647059 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207523494681 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0577721653655 0.102741220458 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0576273451585 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.437510482288 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145532557727 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782085664121 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10665872387 0.0742795772207 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365600063047 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0651989813667 0.0638462369009 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17216422128 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678339401969 0.058150111329 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.