the best way to reduce crime among people is to teach parents a good parenting skills.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?give your own opinion and examples.
In the salad days of the millennium, society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that an improvement in parenting skills can decrease the crime rate. I agree with the above statement and would like to elaborate my opinions in the following paragraphs.
I believe parenting plays a crucial role in shaping a child's future. As parents are the first teacher to the young ones and can teach their toddler in many ways. Although, nowadays schooling have that responsibility of inculcating everything into children but in my opinion, that is the second place where a child can learn.
These days, mostly both parents are working which is why they did not get much time to spend with their young ones. This might can make their kids feel lonely and can draw their attention into wrong things or drugs. Secondly, the environment at home is also an important factor. The researchers have found that the majority of juvenile's had faced a difficulty in their childhood, either there parent's got a divorce or separated in their young age. And this made them feel less wanted gradually this developed into depression. Then finally they outrage this suppressed emotions via their anger or anxiety.
However, there are some other external factors as well which can drag a growing teenager into low self-esteem. One of the most important among them is acceptance in your teenage. If one does not feel accepted by his/her friends or society. Then they might end-up into something which is not better for their future. Here, good skills of parenting can rescue the child and can make them feel secure, socially.
In conclusion, I would like to say parents are the best teacher or advisor to a young growing child. If they have awareness then they can better understand their children's need and can work upon them. Keeping subjectivity in mind, we cannot say hundred percent but a decent fall can be seen if followed better parenting skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95151515152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53514506769 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3624158532 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149880610969 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496736666236 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389073307285 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918135844773 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258767828345 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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