In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a common practice in Britain that aged people move to nurse care homes where they are catered for with other old people with the government occasionally footing the care bills. In my view, the government rather than the family should be responsible for the cost of care as will be explored in this essay.
Firstly, the government has to provide a functioning health care system for its citizens including the old people, to ensure maximum input from the health care personnel. This is because the aged are vulnerable in several aspects and family support is not usually enough for an average citizen. For example, the life expectancy in Ila-orangun has increased to 90 years from a background 70 years and this was thanks to the government taking over the care of all the aged population of the ancient town. Besides, many of these age-groups spent a significant number of years to serve the government and the minimum the government can do is to take responsibility for their care when old age comes calling. The government should, therefore, oversee the care of the older generation.
Though the family may partake in the routine care of the elderly as some might suggest, this should not be beyond companionship as a lot of families manage to eke out a livelihood via peasant jobs. These are usually not enough for basic life's necessities, hence, the government's helping hand is always needed. This has become the conventional practice in my country, Nigeria, where the country has taken over the care of all aged population.
In conclusion, the government should be responsible for the bills in care homes because the old people have a peculiar vulnerability, they spent many years serving the government and many families cannot afford the additional expenses of nursing homes on their meagre earnings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99671052632 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76874239868 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1299324476 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425173705879 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173067075373 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826608672829 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284934298349 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853673874772 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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