Computers are being more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education.To what extents do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that I.T brings more essential and play an ever-increasing role in schools and universities. This leads to the fact that it is predicted that the role of instructors will be obsolete. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, it is demonstrated that people would reap certain benefits from the booming of technology. For the best, the development of I.T not only changes the method of studying but also serves learners better than in the past. This can be illustrated by the modern types of teaching, especially distant learning, which brings about more conveniences for students, consists of a time-saving, cost-efficient and flexible schedule. What is more, teachers who are working under high pressure due to a tight plan will be released by the support of computer. As a result, they can enhance their ability and use their saved time to gain more qualifications as well as spend more time with their family.
On the other hand, it is unable to deny the fact that the computer can provide the amount of useful information, it has also a large variety of limitations. Firstly, I.T is inferior to teachers in terms of the classroom’s management skill due to the fact that the classical education means tutors can deliver lessons and knowledge throughout face-to-face studying, therefore, they know exactly how many students are present, while online learning cannot. Secondly, there are some compulsory subjects such as mental and physical majors that is impossible to educate via computer or electronic devices and this also demonstrated that the role of teachers is pivotal and irreplaceable
In summarize, regardless of the obvious merits of conventional education, I support those who believe that computer cannot replace the role of teacher because of its drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21283783784 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05365789107 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.3804840699 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261916277764 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854392772776 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643698439172 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139630890648 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463922635894 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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