An increasing number of advertisements have been broadcasted on social media in recent times all around the world. I would strongly argue that advertiser persuade consumers to purchase more unnecessary items. This essay will firstly discuss how advertisements affect people’s tendencies, and secondly will suggest some measures to prevent it.
First of all, I would completely contend that consumers are motivated to excess shopping. Despite they do not need an item, they do not need an item, they will purchase it after they are exposed to adverts on billboards television and applications such as Instagram and Facebook. For example, an article by Shopping Trends Magazine in 2018 reported that 80% of teenagers purchase mobile phones once a year in order to own a gadget which is cutting edge of computer technology even though the ones they hold has not become obsolete with the introduction of new technology. Apple’s and Samsung’s adverts which are frequently forecasted on youth portals make them feel that their ones are not useful at all therefore they need to own an updated model in many cases.
Secondly, governments can take some steps to protect citizens. To begin with, educating them can be very effective way. Seminars related with awareness in shopping and money management can be provided regularly to increase awareness in society. For instance, a report from Government of Man in 2017 revealed that delinquent rate decreased from 80% to 50% after compulsory media effect courses had been provided to Man citizens in 2017. Further and more importantly, regulating them can be very important given the fact that many advertisements provide some unreal information related with products to boost sales. Thus if texts, videos and clips are controlled regularly, many customers will not be misleaded.
By way of conclusion, I completely believe that adverts both visual and written leave strong impression on their mind thus in order to protect them officials should take steps such as subsidising courses and strictly controlling them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'billboards'' or 'billboard's'?
Suggestion: billboards'; billboard's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...n related with products to boost sales. Thus if texts, videos and clips are controll...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...courses and strictly controlling them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36697247706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91517360512 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4473091852 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197882416563 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706223478571 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429213697453 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109862171397 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599944533108 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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