Corporal punishment is a term which exists from the ancient times. families use this thinking that their children will become disciplined. they consider it an easy tool to get them on track. but, nowadays some parents have realised the bad effect caused by the continuous usage of this tool. I will discuss about this in more detail and elaborate it further.
In my opinion, any kind of abuse is bad whether physical or mental. As, it will hamper the growth and psychology of the particular person. Nowadays, pupils are actually quiet smart than the previous generation as they have the Internet and digital platforms to make them understand about any kind of situation happening around. In the earlier times, parents have to spank or beat their offsprings in order to make them realise their mistakes so that they won't repeat the same again. Teachers were strict in schools and punish the students with rulers or slaps if they create nuisance or neglected their homework. it worked in that era because the kids at that period of time were quiet naive and thought this was for their betterment.
I belief in today's scenario young people are quiet responsible and sensitive. Even if they make a mistake they immediately try to correct it and apologise for it. Although, some problems are easily corrected but if they done something bad, a fair chance should be given them to improve themselves. In different researches today it has been seen that the toddlers who have suffered any kind of physical abuse in childhood are more likely to become anti-social, insensitive, brash and the worst they will inflict the same pain to their own child after becoming parents themselves. Times have now changed and parents understand that corporal punishment is not a good solution to a child's problem as it will instill a fear in their pupil's mind and they will feel disconnected with their own parents. The biggest reason is a growing teenager if punished infront of his family and siblings will align himself in a bad company and substance abuse to find comfort.
To sum up, I think corporal punishment in earlier times might be a great solution to manage peers but in this age and time it is bad and wrong technique to manage a growing child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, still, as for, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82552083333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52442361193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565104166667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3038626862 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.944444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113317933456 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367802435453 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299853140232 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773529101953 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203634081814 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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