As a country’s population grows, more homes are needed. Is it better to build these homes in existing cities or to create new towns in the countryside?
Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Write 250 words.
The demand for more housing increases as one country’s population steadily rises. The question is, where should these houses be built? In my opinion, it is better to build them in the countryside rather than in the cities.
Many cities simply do not have sufficient free space to build houses, since much of the livable areas are already teeming with residential and commercial properties. In our city for instance, the government has no option but to build housing projects in the outskirts of the city and on a land where an old factory used to stand. However, health officials contested the project, saying that the area is not safe considering all the harmful chemicals that the factory used to work with.
Alternatively, building houses in the countryside comes with several benefits. Firstly, the air is fresher and cleaner which is good for the health of the future residents of the houses. Secondly, the quiet and relaxing environment can help people effectively deal with work-related stress. Aside from the health benefits, building more houses in the countryside can also help to improve that area’s economy. As more people start to live there, companies will eventually follow and put up businesses there.
There are people who dislike the idea of building more homes in the countryside, arguing that such plans can have a negative impact on the environment. However, with proper planning, this shouldn’t be a problem at all. There are many advantages of living in the countryside, and building new houses in such areas will allow more people to enjoy these benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80353496185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6399225817 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155612839089 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552036080557 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425799882628 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099417032444 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343474876811 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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