In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population
Population in developed countries is living longer than ever before. This essay will discuss the main problems resulting from increased life expectancy including living a longer retirement life for individuals and increase in healthcare spend of older population. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including individual awareness to invest in retiral funds and tax on healthcare.
Increase in the average life of people living in developed countries has led to increase in amount of time people have to live after retirement. In addition, this is also increasing the amount of people who should be served under government-funded healthcare programs for older generation. For example, developed countries offer allowances and free healthcare to its non working population. Increase in life expectancy has increased the amount of people who are eligible for these benefits. This is one of the causes of recession in some developed countries. Thus advancement in healthcare has resulted in improved healthcare but has also introduced problems mentioned above.
Government should introduce measures like making investments in retiral funds mandatory and increase tax on working population to address the issues resulting from increased life expectancy. Working population needs to be educated that these measures are being introduced to serve them better when they grow older. For instance, if money from retiral fund is available for older people to spend on their day-to-day life and if part of government’s spends on healthcare of older people can be funded through tax on working population then it will help in addressing the issues arising out of increased life expectancy.
Average life of people is increasing in developed world. This essay discussed the main issues resulting from this including longer retirement life and increase in cost of healthcare for old people. This essay also suggested solutions like introduction of retiral funds and increase in tax on working population to discuss the issues of increased life expectancy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... recession in some developed countries. Thus advancement in healthcare has resulted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5664556962 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98558968948 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433544303797 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7781393449 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248819450178 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112402567684 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517148169596 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179719363145 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349005617257 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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