The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one langua

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

English has become a common language for many parts of the world due to the communication need of foreign visitors.It becomes easy in general for anyone basically who is traveling.This is a commonly accepted language throughout the world.Some people think that english will be used soon globally.
We will discuss both views here.Though as I stated earlier,it has its advantages.When as a tourist, a person is visiting in a same country or a different one;it is easy to communicate.In most part of the country,many people understand this language.It is also better for students who want to settle down in English speaking countries.For example,if a student wants to pursue higher education in a good university;they have to clear certain exams.These are conducted in English language only to check their knowledge and ability.Morever,unnecessary misunderstanding can be avoided between common people and a foreigner.
On the other end,speaking in one language only means there will be injustice to other speeches.The mothertoungue directly contributes to the development and cultural establishment of any country.So if an English is made only language globally,then it will be a loss to many custom practices.Education will be severely affected if the native language is crossed out from the curriculam.As an individual,one must know their own language;whether it is speaking,writing or reading.Textbooks and teaching methods have to be changed thoroughly.Unless the education system is well-developed and students are ready for the alternation, next generation may not suffer from language confusion.
To sum up,we can say that every language has its own values and it shouldn't be neglected.All we should do is to learn a second language and use it as a tool for integrating while keeping mother tongue intact.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, for example, in general, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50537634409 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.90738544314 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.255381233 49.4020404114 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.0 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.75 20.7667163134 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.25 7.06120827912 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330823727767 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192028946786 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077585266362 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192028946786 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077585266362 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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