Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others hold that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Nowadays, employement plays a vital part in every individual life. managers of big company paid increasing salaries when compare to other workers, few people believe it is required to be pay high, but few of them believe that it seems like unequal. I agree with the opinion that directors of large company should earn more than ordinary employees. In this essay i will focus and exemplify my opinion.
Firstly, i would explain some of the responsibilities of the higher officials towards the organization. The primary duty of the manager is to provide all the required facilities for the co-workers. secondary task for the director to direct the employees for their respected work. For instance, A healthy company requires a experienced and skilled Mentor, who should with stand in all circumstances for the growth of the company only then it is possible for the company to be successful in future for that reason the director needs to be credit more than the normal employees.
Secondly, i will focus on the duties of the workers in the company. One of the main role of them need to be full fill the task alloted by the higher officials. Another job is to provide necessary information for the company to enhance. For example, employees working for the company need to be encouraged for their duties in the form on incentives.
To conclude, it is clear by the above discussion that directors of the big organizations need to be offered high salaries as their responsibilities towards company are more compared with other laboures in the company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96168582375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87820825083 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9322669974 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136200862632 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532291480396 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570659742332 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939329658379 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458574889222 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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