"Experience is the father of knowledge". A little experience in few career fields before deciding the ultimate one can help run a long way into a satisfied and happy life. In the era of evolving careers and opportunity, it can undoubtedly be overwhelming for young, naive, passionate and over enthusiastic fellows waiting to explore the unbounded world ahead of them. Hence, I completely agree with this statement.
It is a universal truth that things seen or heard are unlike than lived in. Many a times, people choose careers under this influence and realize the truth later when there is no turning back. Experiencing it, even for a shorter period of time makes person face the reality and gives ideas about the levels of challenges they would have to face in the future. For Instance, in medicine, students have to undergo a compulsary internship programme where they are exposed to different departments. By the end, majority of them are certain and confident about the field they have to expertise in in the future.
Secondly, since the pros and cons are known beforehand, there is a higher possibility of choosing the right job. Especially for those who are indispute and cannot decide one. Hence on the longer run, work related stress is seen to be quite less. Tasks and targets are more optimistically handled, aiding in early promotion and less failures. A study in Oxford, have shown that 70% of the people preferred to have a trial of their job beforehand before approving it. And those who got one, are happy and contented with life.
To sum up, Despite the process being tidious and time consuming, it proves to be a better option than directly choosing a final career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...or heard are unlike than lived in. Many a times, people choose careers under this influ...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ck. Experiencing it, even for a shorter period of time makes person face the reality and gives...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... about the field they have to expertise in in the future. Secondly, since the pros...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ing the right job. Especially for those who are indispute and cannot decide one. Hence ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ho are indispute and cannot decide one. Hence on the longer run, work related stress ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun failures is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... handled, aiding in early promotion and less failures. A study in Oxford, have shown...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95470383275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78851025376 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5823260984 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203145576225 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05070900187 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485811939478 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102185281492 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400815471015 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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