Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
These days, there is a controversial debate between members of society about the impacts of XXX. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of XXX as thoroughly constructive while others hold an opponent's view. I am inclined to believe that XXX is beneficial and should be promoted.
There are several reasons why XXX is advantageous. First of all, it is argued that XXX plays a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that XXX, therefore they would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which would open avenues to new achievements so that XXX's determination and enthusiasm would be amplified towards many daunting tasks. Take XXX, for example, even XXX have to do uphill struggle to XXX.
In addition, it is claimed that XXX. This is to say that XXX, which would instil a strong feeling of self-esteem so that xxx is more likely to perform up to expectations in society. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 found that XXX would enhance the XXX's intellectual abilities to make decisions related to social and personal life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounded the view that XXX would enhance the effectiveness and efficiency of XXX and increase XXX's confidence. It is expected that institutions take cognizance of these facts and begin to adopt this way of XXX.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06140350877 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00728826393 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3935403581 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0100753353702 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00442513742251 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146765204762 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0056382818548 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0097657906399 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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