Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercises. What do you think about the cause of this problem? How can you address this?
Medical experts from several nations believed that people are no longer involved in sporting activities. I think this is as a result of the people's ignorance of the benefits it proffer and the advancement in technology. these could be resolved by the government funding awareness campaigns and paying it into labour laws.
The most important reason for this is ignorance about the benefits of engaging in sports. This is because people only get to consult medical experts when their health deteriorates and they need to go to a hospital. Several people do not know that exercising daily could help reduce the incidence of having diabetes, stroke, high blood pressure, heart failures and so on. Furthermore, the rapid change in technology discourages healthy living. people tend to spend more hours watching movies on the television or socializing on social media, chatting for several hours with friends and loved ones. Thereby, having little or no time to engage in physical activities.
Based on the forgoing, I think this trend could be reduced by the government prompting awareness campaigns. The government should sponsor programmes or show that promote engaging in physical exercises and the benefits to the people. Also, the government could come up with policies that encourages healthy living in the society. For example, the government could pass into the labour law, thirty minutes within the working hours could be dedicated by the employers for exercising.
In conclusion, although physician are concerned about the lack of exercising by the people across the world. In my opinion, these are caused primarily by lack of awareness of the advantages of doing sport and the problem could be overcome if government sponsor programmes that promote healthy lifestyles on the television, radio and the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32871972318 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76176162241 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6267563723 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143784182465 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507595550886 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460083649068 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893212800603 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277484067681 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.